My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Quick and dirty, with some interesting ideas
This was a fun read, though to be honest it felt more like something from Creepypasta or /nosleep; the length and ambiguity both work for the piece (leaving you hungry, pardon the pun, and giving a quick shudder) and against it (not giving you enough time to fully immerse yourself, and feeling slightly rushed.) Well worth checking out, though, and the preview piece at the end serves as a great teaser that inspires you to seek out more by this author.
Give it a taste; you won’t regret it.